DISQUS

Cute Is What We Aim For: 'Holmes'

  • Karima · 11 months ago
    " get down to the bottom of the line" haha i like how you replaced the word "line"
    with an actual _____ (line)
    very clever :)
  • lil wayne · 11 months ago
    or its: wire. cuz it rhymes with fire and required
    OR maybe its: =D

    lol
  • I know you :( and · 11 months ago
    you forgot me
  • blg_is_my_music · 11 months ago
    very, very, very clever!

    saaaawwweeettt mannn.
    :D
  • mandolin01 · 11 months ago
    your words have a way of wrapping themselves around my brain.
  • I'm regularly irregular · 11 months ago
    is this about teeth again?
  • lil weezy · 11 months ago
    lol. shaantonia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I relapsed :/ oops.


    ugh. I need to go shovel the snow. this is what one gets when one lives with parents. they get to boss one around. sighs.
  • I'mtheweezerpinkertongirl · 11 months ago
    :D yeah me too. and I miss you. talk to me please :*(
  • awful's friend · 11 months ago
    I don't know what you meant :*********(. sighs. not, me you :(.

    sighs.
  • Antonia · 11 months ago
    sighs you meant something else. :(

    Please talk to me right now, whoever you are :*( I have no school tomorrow. Please pretend with me :*(

    its 10:30pm
  • forgotten purposely · 11 months ago
    i always relapse 8/
  • jena! · 11 months ago
    you’​re so tired​,​ with eyes on fire.
    ​yet you’​re still​ unsur​e of what is requi​red.​

    i enjoy eveything you write to the max.
  • Patricia · 11 months ago
    crime! haha right? that makes sense. i think haha nice poem! <3
  • .monica. · 11 months ago
    shaant, please stop being so amazing at writing. you make people like me feel lame.


    but its ok, i still adore you
  • AvvaRae · 11 months ago
    i agree with karima for sure. good night
  • blg_is_my_music · 11 months ago
    luv it, luv u. perfect


    <3
  • blg_is_my_music · 11 months ago
    o, and i also luv the "_____" part

    hehehe.
  • blg_is_my_music · 11 months ago
    you are so talented, and can come up with diff lyrics/poems everyday.


    finally! great talent coming from buffalo!

    thanks for that

    <3 alyssa
  • madison · 11 months ago
    tell me about it.
    sweet dreams.
  • LipstickHasAWayx · 11 months ago
    I say the same thing everytime
    I envy your writing ablity
    they're quite amazing
  • pofc3 · 11 months ago
    I was under the impression that you didn't sleep...
  • awful's friend · 11 months ago
    or he never does
  • Antonia · 11 months ago
    hey i'm here.

    Hi :)
  • Bianca · 11 months ago
    You amaze me<3
  • RamshackleAnts · 11 months ago
    This should really be on Twitter, but: Feel better.
  • molly · 11 months ago
    Haha, clever way to say line, if that's what you meant.
    Your lyrics are SO underestimated, really.
  • Rumin8's friend · 11 months ago
    Rumin8,

    Where are you? I haven't seen you for so long? What has become of you?

    :*(

    Did you forget me? Am I replaced? :*(
  • forgotten purposely · 11 months ago
    A heat bill. Throw you over a hill. If I can I will. With or without the use of a pill. I can clean up whatever you spill
  • awful's friend · 11 months ago
    a sure lock. my eyes are still bad. no way of getting around them. no way. maybe never will either :(.

    sighs. I can't believe you forgot me since Dec. 1, 2008 :*(.
  • me · 11 months ago
    how could you forget someone who've known for so long? :*(
  • Fred · 11 months ago
    Shaant go sign up for the county fairs tour. Sign up starts now. I wanted you guys to play at our county fair last year. I guess you and Fred didn't read my comment.
  • I don't feel good · 11 months ago
    Dave,

    I don't feel good. Please write me something along the lines of "Well, even if you wish to go back, to live like back then. There is just no way, no possibility of that ever to occur. Hopefully we all move forward and usually "forward" is associated with getting better. Throughout history we could see that progress does and should take place. So, don't worry, you don't have to keep saying you 'miss back then, ' because someday you should soon realize that then will not always be what is treasured."

    -Dave's Princess Charming.
  • Maddie · 11 months ago
    i like this one